Okay, I like your graphic. Nice cropping and use of photoshop techniques. It also almost shows the allusion of Mulan. It would be nice if you had a pic of you and your dad in it; either when you were little or in this present time. ^-^ I like the text and Chinese characters, at least I think it is Chinese. Hahaha. So yeah, this is a good start! Try to incorporate more of the father-daughter relationship into your graphic since that's what your poem is about. Good luck on final revision! :D
Hi Alex. Nice graphic. The cherry blossoms and characters bring out Mulan in your allusion. One suggestion I have for you is to change "strong" to "strength". Good job on this rough draft. =P
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ReplyDeleteOkay, I like your graphic. Nice cropping and use of photoshop techniques. It also almost shows the allusion of Mulan. It would be nice if you had a pic of you and your dad in it; either when you were little or in this present time. ^-^ I like the text and Chinese characters, at least I think it is Chinese. Hahaha. So yeah, this is a good start! Try to incorporate more of the father-daughter relationship into your graphic since that's what your poem is about. Good luck on final revision! :D
- Sharmaine
Hi Alex. Nice graphic. The cherry blossoms and characters bring out Mulan in your allusion. One suggestion I have for you is to change "strong" to "strength". Good job on this rough draft. =P
ReplyDelete- Desiree